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Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




Look past the bloody layers

What lies within this cold form?

Slice through the dry, dead skin

Am I already too far torn?

Dig within the decaying flesh

Is there anything but death to see?

Discard the burnt, black ash

Underneath can you still find me?
©2003-2009 ~alwayzdazd
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Is there anything left to find?

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*doubleohpsycho Jun 29, 2003, 5:43:55 AM
...I wish you didn't feel this way...and I just wanted to say I'm sorry...:hugs: :hugs:
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~azurainsides Jun 29, 2003, 5:49:40 AM
Jawdrop

wow...... this poem is heart-clenchingly amazing. wow.... all i can say is wow right now.. so im just gona fave it. and read it again.. and again.. and again......
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~seanmurray Jun 29, 2003, 6:06:49 AM
very different , I like the statement/question format you used here. short with impact.
I think there's more underneath then you guess at,your words alone are full of feeling,
its easy to find yourself in the dark and imagine that there is no light,dawn will come.
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~sandam Jun 29, 2003, 6:57:08 AM
I will still find you for it is not your mortal form that I would seek. Your soul, so tortured of late, is what I would seek and find. Upon finding it I would soothe it with a healing purr ;) (Wink)

Awesome poem! w00t! +fav - there are tears froming in my eyes and a lump in my throat so there I did it for you now you've done it for me. :) (Smile)

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We are the poeple our parents warned us about

Nothing pisses non-conformists off more than other non-conformists who refuse to conform to the rules of non-conformity.

When Life gets you down,
Stand up.
Look him in the eyes.
And knee the sucker in
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~mrfeelnothing Jun 29, 2003, 7:05:51 AM
I can find you. =) (Smile)
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.
.
Blow away the ash and find your heart
For it is only after you walk through the painful flames,
That the impurities boil away
The parts that are dead will shed away
And it is then
That you will find yourself.
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~asmodeon Jun 29, 2003, 7:41:50 AM
If someone looks deep enough, they will find something. *nods with wisdom that only the youth delude themselves into having* Hug
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`chilipalmer Jun 29, 2003, 8:08:21 AM
I found you :D (Big Grin)

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~shatteredone Jun 29, 2003, 9:41:00 AM
Shocked thats amazing. short but oh my gosh well done. your word choice is phenomenal! and the every other rhyming italics great touch!! bravo! Winner very very emotional pome as is all of your stuff. but this, i think the simplicity of it is what makes it so intense. Clap

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~losingstreak Jun 29, 2003, 8:05:35 PM
i hate you

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--You've got the money--
---We've got the soul---

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