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Feelings shoved so deep inside
Buried by bitter lies and hate
She wore a suit of armor
Behind that; her only place to hide

Years went by, as armor rusted
Indented with painful reminders
She lived with the face of a ghost
Her shadow; she no longer trusted

Then he came and offered something more
With tales of no more pain and tears
She began to peel off layers of corrupted steel
And cautiously opened the once locked door

Words spoken with such tender intensity
Brought to life what had been long since dead
She was told it was alright to feel this way
Never thinking it was wishful security

A heart began to breath once again
Pumpimg pure blood through soft veins
She ignored all of the unpleasant stirrings
Refusing to see how it might end

Blades suddenly came with force her way
Piercing the pale, sun-deprived skin
She knew he would slay her fragile heart
The ends came undone, and finally began to fray

Eyes were opened as darkness fell
Blinking through heavy, blood-drenched tears
She sought to find some kind of valid reason
But knowing she would never live to tell

The suit of armor was brought back out
Welded firmly into place for one last time
She sealed it with burning tears
Walking on, saturated by doubt

Her bloody heart in the palm of her hand
Wandering, never able to completely understand
©2003-2009 ~alwayzdazd
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just something roughly based on a recent situation in my life..trust is rare, me displaying emotion towards another, even more rare...never again.
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Awwww such a lovely piece, intense imagery, wow :)

I love it...
Truth be known armor Is NEVER perement, walls fall... hearts break ... Pain flows... There is a reason in it all.. we must all see the reason left behind ... I have picked this reason up and it continues my life..


Let thy heart be free... thy mind fearless... and thy eyes Open


Wisdom isnt the only way to Know
Very powerful.
Very well written.

:ninjafella:Matt :ninjafella:
:hug: people suck sometimes... well most of the time. this poem is very, very well written. emotions descriped so intensly, so strongly. amazing poem. although, the inspiration is heart wrenching, and probably not easily described. i think you did an excellent job.
omgosh.. i really almost cried.. like this is so unfourtanately familiar and i hate that it is the way things are .. :hug: i know nothing i could say would make you feel better but I hope that you are okay... despite the subject you displayed wonderfully the way many feel
*gasps for breath* whoa!! this is absolutely phenomenal!! definitely. i feel like i've just been punched in the chest hard and every bone in my chest is broken that is such an impactful poem! really truly fabulous job!! :winner: :hug:
This is really incredible. So powerful and descriptive. The last two lines really nail this one home. Great work
Tears are an emotional safety valve. But as with all valves you must know when to turn it off :)

Armour is a strange thing...almost unbeatable in areas and yet completely open in others. So in order to cover up one area you uncover another.

The advantage here is that you know where the weak part of the armour is and can be careful about who you expose it to.

The poem was wonderful as always :!:

Valar. :)
A wonderful metaphor my dear friend. Such a beautifully emotional work! You impress me deeply once again! :hug:
Just be careful as to how much you shield, or how little you do .... you might just end up keeping out someone who's worth while.

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