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Take a look up
As you're sitting on the cement floor
Maybe I'll catch your eye
Just in time for you to
See me drift on by

One eye open
The other constantly blinking
Impossible to stand up
If you get used to sinking
Stay right where you are

Get comfortable
Being held down tight

As long as you know where you're at
Forget what it felt like
To have a steady pace
You can't get hurt again
If you stay where it's safe

Close the other eye
To ease the transition

As instinct pulls you deeper in
You step away from what is real
Clogged veins reinforce your reasons
To become numb looks so inviting
But is it worth giving up the sensation?

Slow down your motion
As your reflexes become stationary thoughts
Fast forward through emotion
Just to eventually say you forgot

You tell me it's easier that way
So don't bother getting up for me
©2004-2009 ~alwayzdazd
:iconalwayzdazd:

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:iconpencillicious:
mmm....


...seems like that would be the way....


but it's not. *hugs* Never in forgetting. But then, the remembering can be just as hard to deal with sometimes. I guess...it's all in the living...

*huge hugs* :)


Great, provocative work as always love.

--
When one has dealings with scholars and artists it is easy to miscalculate in opposite directions: behind a remarkable artist one not infrequently finds a mediocre man, and behind a mediocre artist often a very remarkable man.
:icondipped-in-hunni:
Awesome piece hun! :) good stuff, keep it coming! :blowkiss:

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love nessie.xx
:floating:
you're lost 'til you're found..but i'm for ever lost..
:iconi-apathy:
I wish I could say something more in depth or meaningful, but the words aren't coming to me. What I can say though is that I can relate as this poem speaks to how I feel in my life presently. It's hard to cite examples, but I really see myself in this, which is . . . I'm not sure if that's either good or bad.

How have you been? I thought you disappeared or something.

--
When all else fails, blame curiosity.
:iconxam1814:
wonderful piece.

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i am a conessieur of roads.
:iconwindburned:
your peotry is stunning

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"Art does not depict exactly what the artist sees, but it is a picture of the psyche of the artist as he perceives the world around him." -Tim Hinck
:iconnatdaddy:
i like this one alot.....it made me feel and see pictures in my mind.....very cool.

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confusion is the door way to thought.
:iconsyphix:
this made me really think - much like all your writing. you have yet to fail to inspire me to this very day.. your work is flawless.

i lub you :) :hug:
take care hun

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Metaphor for a missing moment..
Pull me in to your perfect cirlce

~APC

:iconmantisman:
'You can't get hurt again
If you stay where it's safe'

That's my favourite part. Nice piece, it's a thinker :D

:hug:
:iconbraceletsofsmoke:
wow. this is a really good piece. there is something about it that had be captured throughout and i now must fav it. well done.

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